大學(xué)寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)演講稿 模板1
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"臺(tái)上十分鐘，臺(tái)下十年功"，用這句話來(lái)形容演講前的準(zhǔn)備工作十分貼切。優(yōu)秀演講者除了要有口才、學(xué)識(shí)、品德和穩(wěn)定的心理素質(zhì)外，在每一次演講前都要進(jìn)行認(rèn)真的準(zhǔn)備，深入了解聽(tīng)眾、廣泛收集材料、寫(xiě)好演講稿、反復(fù)演練等。其中演講稿的撰寫(xiě)是關(guān)鍵，寫(xiě)好演講稿可以幫助演講者加深對(duì)主題、內(nèi)容的理解和熟悉，理清思路，增強(qiáng)語(yǔ)言表現(xiàn)力，恰當(dāng)掌握演講時(shí)間，使演講者心中有數(shù)，有助于打消緊張情緒。
寫(xiě)好演講稿要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：
一、根據(jù)聽(tīng)眾特點(diǎn)確定演講內(nèi)容
演講是講給人聽(tīng)的，聽(tīng)眾聽(tīng)得懂、喜歡聽(tīng)才能有助于演講目的的實(shí)現(xiàn)。聽(tīng)眾渴望了解的是他們關(guān)心的問(wèn)題，對(duì)其工作生活有指導(dǎo)價(jià)值的知識(shí)和信息，因此演講者的選題應(yīng)從聽(tīng)眾的心理需求出發(fā)，這能縮短演講者與聽(tīng)眾間的心理距離，獲得支持。了解聽(tīng)眾首先要了解聽(tīng)眾的身份階層、文化層次、職業(yè)、年齡等，這些因素會(huì)影響聽(tīng)眾的理解能力、語(yǔ)言感知能力；其次要了解聽(tīng)眾心的焦點(diǎn)，有時(shí)一場(chǎng)演講的聽(tīng)眾成百上千，難免各有所思各有所想，性格、心態(tài)各不相同，但在某種特定的場(chǎng)合下，比如一個(gè)非常的時(shí)代、某個(gè)特殊意義的時(shí)刻、某種特定的情景等，人們所關(guān)心的焦點(diǎn)往往會(huì)比較集中地落在一個(gè)問(wèn)題上而暫時(shí)統(tǒng)一了愿望和要求，那么演講者就應(yīng)該因地制宜、有的放矢。
二、提練主題深刻之情
主題是演講稿的統(tǒng)帥，演講主題的提練應(yīng)本著使人獲益的原則，那種空洞膚淺或主題擁塞演講會(huì)令人生厭的。演講主題應(yīng)是演講者的真知灼見(jiàn)，才能吸引聽(tīng)眾，使人獲益。然而演講者的真知灼見(jiàn)又是來(lái)源于廣博的生活的，因此提練主題還應(yīng)善于對(duì)生活進(jìn)行升華，能夠以小見(jiàn)大、從平凡中見(jiàn)精神，由細(xì)小中見(jiàn)偉奇，善于挖掘社會(huì)現(xiàn)象中所隱含的人生哲理、客觀規(guī)律，善于從一個(gè)比較新奇的角度去切入生活的實(shí)質(zhì)，在一個(gè)更高的高度上去觀察生活、思索現(xiàn)實(shí)。
三、材料充實(shí)新穎感人
寫(xiě)文章要求選擇材料要圍繞主旨、典型真實(shí)，演講稿的寫(xiě)作也不例外。但演講作為一種特殊的語(yǔ)言活動(dòng)，要求其材料要符合演講的鼓動(dòng)性、針對(duì)性、情感性等特征。此外，演講選擇材料要多準(zhǔn)備幾套，有備無(wú)患，以便臨場(chǎng)應(yīng)變，留有增減的余地。
（四）舊事新議賦予人們所熟悉的事物以新意或從一個(gè)新的角度來(lái)議論一個(gè)舊話題能激發(fā)起聽(tīng)眾的興趣。演講材料切忌陳詞濫調(diào)。
四、結(jié)構(gòu)跌宕勢(shì)如破行
結(jié)構(gòu)即是根據(jù)某種需要把散亂的材料有條理有邏輯地組織起來(lái)，使材料之間相輔相成，構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的有機(jī)體。而演講結(jié)構(gòu)即是以掀起聽(tīng)眾的情感波瀾為宗旨，巧妙地安排論點(diǎn)材料，以便做到層次清晰、循序漸進(jìn)，自始至終吸引住聽(tīng)眾。
（一）開(kāi)頭引人入勝。
萬(wàn)事開(kāi)頭難，演講的開(kāi)頭更是如此，因?yàn)樗鼡?dān)負(fù)著極其重要的任務(wù)，好的開(kāi)頭能鎮(zhèn)定紛亂的會(huì)場(chǎng)、集中聽(tīng)眾的注意力，還能導(dǎo)入主題、定下基調(diào)，把聽(tīng)眾帶入演講者需要的氣氛中去。因此對(duì)于演講的開(kāi)頭應(yīng)精心設(shè)計(jì)，力求引人入勝。演講如何開(kāi)頭應(yīng)根據(jù)演講內(nèi)容、演講風(fēng)格、聽(tīng)眾心理、現(xiàn)場(chǎng)情況等因素來(lái)確定，或開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山揭示論點(diǎn)、或提出問(wèn)題引人思考、或名言警句發(fā)表高論、或善于抒情創(chuàng)造意境、或描繪敘述形象生動(dòng)等等，方式方法不勝枚舉，目的都是要吸引聽(tīng)眾。
（二）主體扣人心弦
主體部分是回答問(wèn)題、鞏固成果的階段。這一部分不能空洞，應(yīng)以充實(shí)的材料充分展開(kāi)，深入挖掘主題、廣泛闡述道理，保持開(kāi)端造成的聲勢(shì)，環(huán)環(huán)相接、扣人心弦。主體部分的材料安排應(yīng)注意形成內(nèi)在情感的節(jié)奏感，即通過(guò)由淺入深的論述層層推進(jìn)聽(tīng)眾的情感。安排材料時(shí)還應(yīng)將典型的突出的事例詳寫(xiě)，一般性的材料作為輔助略寫(xiě)，詳略相間，造在情感的張弛回旋。主體部分的材料應(yīng)多姿多彩，正反相照、深淺相兼、觸類旁通，不可單調(diào)呆，才會(huì)顯得起伏轉(zhuǎn)折、處處有景，時(shí)刻吸引住聽(tīng)眾。
（三）結(jié)尾掀起高潮。
經(jīng)過(guò)開(kāi)頭和主體部分的蓄勢(shì)，演講者和聽(tīng)眾的情緒都已水到渠成達(dá)到了最高峰，這時(shí)應(yīng)該安排一個(gè)有力的結(jié)尾，總結(jié)全文突出主題、掀起高潮、摧人奮發(fā)，給聽(tīng)眾留下一個(gè)更強(qiáng)烈的回味無(wú)窮的印象，演講的結(jié)尾應(yīng)簡(jiǎn)潔明快，精彩有力，切忌虎頭蛇尾、枯燥冗長(zhǎng)、當(dāng)斷不斷、落入俗套。演講的結(jié)尾方式多種多樣，可重復(fù)本文論點(diǎn)進(jìn)行強(qiáng)調(diào)，可直抒胸臆進(jìn)行呼吁，可發(fā)表宏誓鼓動(dòng)聽(tīng)眾，可展望未來(lái)給人希望等等。
五、語(yǔ)言生動(dòng)通俗易懂
演講的語(yǔ)言是介乎口語(yǔ)與文學(xué)語(yǔ)言之間的，它既要求遣詞造句簡(jiǎn)練明確、通俗易懂，又要求表情意生動(dòng)形象富于美感，才能既讓人聽(tīng)得懂，又讓人喜歡聽(tīng)。演講語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用得好能使演講內(nèi)容插上翅膀，否則詞不達(dá)意，談而列味，便寸步難行。演講語(yǔ)言的運(yùn)用要求：
（一）體人。是指演講者要用聽(tīng)眾能聽(tīng)得懂的語(yǔ)言講話，根據(jù)聽(tīng)眾的文化層次造擇語(yǔ)言形式，做到語(yǔ)義明白曉暢，不故弄玄虛，不使用晦澀生僻的語(yǔ)詞，應(yīng)將自己的思想和感情直白地表達(dá)出來(lái)。
（二）個(gè)性化。演講語(yǔ)言應(yīng)體現(xiàn)深厚演講者處人獨(dú)特的風(fēng)格，個(gè)性化的語(yǔ)言自然真誠(chéng)，能給人留下深刻的印象，聽(tīng)眾從演講者或沉郁、或激昂、或詼諧、或充滿哲理的語(yǔ)言中能洞察演講者的個(gè)性與人格，而人格的魅力往往比語(yǔ)言的吸引力更強(qiáng)大。
（三）有激情。演講中內(nèi)心的激情主要是通過(guò)充滿感情的語(yǔ)言表露出來(lái)。演講語(yǔ)言切忌平淡乏味、有理無(wú)情，這樣的演講連自己都感動(dòng)不了，如何能感染聽(tīng)眾呢？因此撰寫(xiě)演講稿要多用氣勢(shì)磅礴的排比句、情緒飽滿的設(shè)問(wèn)句、直抒胸臆的感嘆句等，使語(yǔ)言鏗鏘有力、氣勢(shì)逼人，把聽(tīng)眾拉入語(yǔ)言所塑造的氛圍中，跟隨演講者亦悲亦喜痛亦怒。
大學(xué)寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)演講稿 模板2
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寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)演講稿的格式
英語(yǔ)演講稿- -
我的演講稿：
ladies and gentlemen , good afternoon! i’m very glad to stand here and give you a short speech. today my topic is "youth". i hope you will like it , and found the importance in your youth so that more cherish it.
first i want to ask you some questions:
1、 do you know what is youth?
2、 how do you master your youth?
youth
youth is not a time of life, it is a state of mind ; it is not rosy cheeks , red lips and supple knees, it is a matter of the emotions : it is the freshness ; it is the freshness of the deep springs of life .
youth means a temperamental predominance of courage over timidity of the appetite , for adventure over the love of ease. this often e_ists in a man of 60 more than a boy of 20 . nobody grows old merely by a number of years . we grow old by deserting our ideals.
years wrinkle the skin , but to give up enthusiasm wrinkles the soul . worry , fear , self –distrust bows the heart and turns the spirit back to dust .
大學(xué)寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)演講稿 模板3
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怎么寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)演講稿
如何充分發(fā)揮小學(xué)英語(yǔ)在實(shí)現(xiàn)教育目標(biāo)中的功能，從而體現(xiàn)小學(xué)英語(yǔ)在整個(gè)課程中的地位和作用，是小學(xué)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)必須重視的問(wèn)題。英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的啟蒙階段是非常重要的，教學(xué)的成功與否將對(duì)學(xué)生的終身學(xué)習(xí)產(chǎn)生深遠(yuǎn)影響。小學(xué)開(kāi)設(shè)英語(yǔ)課程的目的在于培養(yǎng)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的積極情感，形成初步的英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)感，打好語(yǔ)音、語(yǔ)調(diào)的基礎(chǔ)，具備用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)進(jìn)行交流的初級(jí)能力。通過(guò)英語(yǔ)課程的學(xué)習(xí)，豐富社會(huì)生活經(jīng)歷、開(kāi)拓視野、樹(shù)立學(xué)習(xí)的自信心。為此在實(shí)際教學(xué)中我們要求廣大教師積極實(shí)踐和探索，在教學(xué)目標(biāo)、課程實(shí)施、教學(xué)方法、教學(xué)評(píng)價(jià)等方面做到層層推進(jìn)。在實(shí)踐過(guò)程中應(yīng)該明確以下幾點(diǎn)：
1．在教學(xué)總體目標(biāo)上，重興趣、重成就感、重自信心的培養(yǎng)。教師通過(guò)多種激勵(lì)的方式，如獎(jiǎng)品激勵(lì)、任務(wù)激勵(lì)、榮譽(yù)激勵(lì)、信任激勵(lì)和情感激勵(lì)等，激發(fā)學(xué)生積極參與、大膽實(shí)踐、體驗(yàn)成功的喜悅。有了成就感，就有了自信心，學(xué)生就會(huì)渴望學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)；在課程實(shí)施上，重環(huán)境、重頻率、重效率。教學(xué)中特別強(qiáng)調(diào)語(yǔ)言環(huán)境的創(chuàng)設(shè)，充分利用和開(kāi)發(fā)電視、錄音、錄像、光碟等多種媒體，豐富教學(xué)內(nèi)容、活躍教學(xué)氣氛、創(chuàng)設(shè)生動(dòng)和真實(shí)的語(yǔ)言環(huán)境。盡量在課堂上創(chuàng)造真實(shí)的情境，克服課時(shí)少的困難，并且按排早讀課及時(shí)復(fù)習(xí)，保證學(xué)生高頻率的接觸英語(yǔ)，為學(xué)生創(chuàng)造有效的學(xué)習(xí)條件，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率；在語(yǔ)言教學(xué)目標(biāo)上，重語(yǔ)感、重語(yǔ)音語(yǔ)調(diào)基礎(chǔ)、重交流能力。學(xué)校和教師積極創(chuàng)造條件，提供良好的語(yǔ)言環(huán)境和設(shè)備，通過(guò)提供大量的感知、體驗(yàn)、模仿等實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，幫助學(xué)生形成初步的語(yǔ)感。語(yǔ)音語(yǔ)調(diào)的.學(xué)習(xí)包括發(fā)音、重音、語(yǔ)調(diào)、節(jié)奏和語(yǔ)流等多方面，教學(xué)中要求教師防止以單音準(zhǔn)確為目的的教學(xué)，通過(guò)多聽(tīng)、多模仿，在有意義的語(yǔ)境中進(jìn)行訓(xùn)練，奠定語(yǔ)音語(yǔ)調(diào)的基礎(chǔ)。強(qiáng)調(diào)要培養(yǎng)學(xué)生交流能力就要?jiǎng)?chuàng)設(shè)交流的情景，使學(xué)生通過(guò)交流發(fā)展交流的能力。
2．在教學(xué)模式和方法上，重體驗(yàn)、重實(shí)踐、重參與、重創(chuàng)造。要求教學(xué)設(shè)計(jì)貼近生活，符合小學(xué)生興趣的需求；教學(xué)內(nèi)容能引起學(xué)生的興趣，例如韻律詩(shī)歌、寓言故事、會(huì)話表演、游戲等；教學(xué)的語(yǔ)言材料要真實(shí)、實(shí)用。學(xué)生在課上通過(guò)用中學(xué)、學(xué)中用，反復(fù)實(shí)踐，學(xué)用結(jié)合。功能、結(jié)構(gòu)、話題、任務(wù)做到有機(jī)結(jié)合；以話題為核心，以功能和結(jié)構(gòu)為主線，以任務(wù)型活動(dòng)為目標(biāo)安排各單元或各課的教學(xué)；通過(guò)視、聽(tīng)、說(shuō)、玩、唱、畫(huà)、游、讀、寫(xiě)、譯等饒有趣味的活動(dòng)，讓學(xué)生接觸足夠量的語(yǔ)言材料，保證輸入量，"習(xí)得"與"學(xué)得"結(jié)合，使學(xué)生逐步培養(yǎng)起初步的語(yǔ)感；通過(guò)大量語(yǔ)言材料的輸入，特別是聲像材料的示范，學(xué)生模仿，教師指導(dǎo)，使學(xué)生逐步形成良好的語(yǔ)音、語(yǔ)調(diào)、書(shū)寫(xiě)、拼讀的習(xí)慣。設(shè)計(jì)任務(wù)型活動(dòng)，開(kāi)放空間，激活學(xué)生的思維，培養(yǎng)創(chuàng)造思維。自始至終引導(dǎo)學(xué)生通過(guò)完成具體任務(wù)活動(dòng)來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)語(yǔ)言，讓學(xué)生為了特定的學(xué)習(xí)目的去進(jìn)行特定的語(yǔ)言活動(dòng)，通過(guò)完成特定的交際任務(wù)來(lái)獲得和積累相應(yīng)的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)。教學(xué)方法要多樣，且生動(dòng)活潑，激發(fā)學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)興趣。充分利用教科書(shū)中的課文創(chuàng)設(shè)栩栩如生的情景，為學(xué)生提供使用英語(yǔ)進(jìn)行交流的機(jī)會(huì)。實(shí)踐中，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)每當(dāng)孩子們進(jìn)入角色，成功地做成一件事，他們便情不自禁，喜形于色，因此興趣倍增、信心加強(qiáng)，動(dòng)機(jī)和情意受到了很大的激勵(lì)。同時(shí)要求布置的練習(xí)形式要多種多樣，做到手、腦、口、耳、眼、肢、體并用，靜態(tài)、動(dòng)態(tài)相結(jié)合，基本操練與自由練習(xí)相結(jié)合，單項(xiàng)和綜合練習(xí)相結(jié)合。通過(guò)大量的實(shí)踐，使學(xué)生具有良好的語(yǔ)音、語(yǔ)調(diào)、書(shū)寫(xiě)和拼讀的基礎(chǔ)，并能用英語(yǔ)表情達(dá)意，開(kāi)展簡(jiǎn)單的交流活動(dòng)。
大學(xué)寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)演講稿 模板4
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怎么寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)一分鐘演講稿
第英語(yǔ)一分鐘演講稿
ladies and gentlemen , good afternoon! im very glad to stand here and give you a short speech. today my topic is "youth". i hope you will like it , and found the importance in your youth so that more cherish it.
first i want to ask you some questions: 1、 do you know what is youth? 2、 how do you master your youth?
youth
youth is not a time of life, it is a state of mind it is not rosy cheeks , red lips and supple knees, it is a matter of the emotions : it is the freshness it is the freshness of the deep springs of life .
youth means a temperamental predominance of courage over timidity of the appetite , for adventure over the love of ease. this often e_ists in a man of 60 more than a boy of 20 . nobody grows old merely by a number of years . we grow old by deserting our ideals.
years wrinkle the skin , but to give up enthusiasm wrinkles the soul . worry , fear , self –distrust bows the heart and turns the spirit back to dust .
whether 60 of 16 , there is in every human being s heart the lure of wonders, the unfailing childlike appetite of whats ne_t and the joy of the game of living . in the center of your heart and my heart theres a wireless station : so long as it receives messages of beauty , hope ,cheer, courage and power from men and from the infinite, so long as you are young .
when the aerials are down , and your spirit is covered with snows of cynicism and the ice of pessimism, then you are grown old ,even at 20 , but as long as your aerials are up ,to catch waves of optimism , there is hope you may die young at 80. thats all ! thank you!
第英語(yǔ)一分鐘演講稿
as we all know, we will celebrate our 60th year of independence. __ years is a short history for any country, however, many people’s dreams have come true. as a middle school student , i’m very glad that i have the chance to celebrate the 60 anniversaries
in the past __years , our standards of living really has changed dramatically. in the past, parents often worried about their children lacking eating and wearing. in that time, we did not see a number of overseas brands in china , and the pursuit of fashion become the subject of life. in the past, people often communicated by writing letters or taking telegram. today nearly every people use mobile phones to communicate with everyone at anywhere. a succession of changes has affected us , which leads us to live a more happier life.
in the past 60 years, china has scored impressive achievements in its development. china’s economy , especially in the latest 30 years, runs at an average of 9.4 percent，with its gdp jumping from 147.3 billion us dollars to over 1.4 trillion us dollars. as the same time, the technology of chain has improved rapidly. the "gold seven’ lunch is the best evidence. the most pride of china is the success of " beijing olympic games", which e_hibits a harmonious china to foreigners.
in the end , let us bless our dear county to have a bright future together.
大學(xué)寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)演講稿 模板5
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無(wú)論在學(xué)習(xí)還是工作中，我們都會(huì)接觸或用到各類英語(yǔ)演講，小到課堂作業(yè)和工作匯報(bào)，大到會(huì)議發(fā)言和職位競(jìng)選。那么如何才能打造精彩的英語(yǔ)演講稿呢?下面筆者就以喬布斯2024年斯坦福大學(xué)畢業(yè)演講稿為范本來(lái)具體剖析一下英語(yǔ)演講稿的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，幫助大家了解其基本寫(xiě)作要領(lǐng)。i’d just turned 30.”數(shù)據(jù)很直觀，能讓聽(tīng)眾更直接地認(rèn)識(shí)和理解演講內(nèi)容。 結(jié)尾有“道”，畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛 演講的結(jié)尾往往需要起到“畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛”的作用，要盡量做到意味深長(zhǎng)、啟發(fā)思考。開(kāi)篇和正文再好，如果結(jié)尾過(guò)于平淡，整個(gè)演講的精彩程度也會(huì)大打折扣。那么如何做到結(jié)尾有“道”呢?首先我們來(lái)看看喬布斯的這篇演講稿，他的結(jié)尾比開(kāi)篇更加出彩，采用的是“引文結(jié)尾”的方式，達(dá)到了引人深思的效果。他在結(jié)尾說(shuō)道：“stewart and his team put out several issues of the whole earth catalog, and then when it had run its course, they put out a final issue. it was the mid-1970s, and i was your age. on the back cover of their final issue was a photograph of an early morning country road, the kind you might find yourself hitchhiking on if you were so adventurous. beneath it were the words ‘stay hungry. stay foolish.’ it was their farewell message as they signed off. stay hungry. stay foolish. and i have always wished that for myself. and now, as you graduate to begin anew, i wish that for you. stay hungry. stay foolish.”喬布斯不僅在演講結(jié)尾引用了這句“stay hungry. stay foolish”(求知若渴，虛懷若谷)，而且重復(fù)三遍，強(qiáng)化了聽(tīng)眾的印象。這句話后來(lái)也被廣泛傳播，被譽(yù)為該篇演講的精髓。 除了喬布斯這種“引文結(jié)尾”的方式，常見(jiàn)的演講結(jié)尾方式還有如下幾種：①總結(jié)演講。對(duì)演講中的各個(gè)論點(diǎn)或要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單總結(jié)和梳理，加深聽(tīng)眾的印象。②強(qiáng)有力的陳述。這種方式不同于引用他人之言，往往是演講者自己的總結(jié)和心聲。一個(gè)非常經(jīng)典的例子是patrick henry的演講“liberty or death”。他在結(jié)尾時(shí)說(shuō)道：“is life so dear, or peace so sweet, as to be purchased at the price of chains and slavery? forbid it, almighty god! i know not what course others may take; but as for me, give me liberty, or give me death!”③首尾呼應(yīng)。在演講結(jié)尾對(duì)開(kāi)篇提到的主題和重點(diǎn)進(jìn)行重新闡述，這是體現(xiàn)
結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，邏輯清晰
指出演講話題的重要性。比如要做一場(chǎng)關(guān)于“英語(yǔ)演講的藝術(shù)”的演講，演講者在一開(kāi)始就可以指出該演講對(duì)于聽(tīng)眾今后的學(xué)習(xí)、工作將會(huì)有很大幫助，甚至可以給出一些數(shù)據(jù)和實(shí)例，讓聽(tīng)眾明白不聽(tīng)這個(gè)演講將會(huì)是一個(gè)損失，這樣聽(tīng)眾就會(huì)樂(lè)于認(rèn)真聽(tīng)演講了。②使聽(tīng)眾感到震驚。例如要做一場(chǎng)關(guān)于“生活方式與疾病”的演講，開(kāi)篇就可以給出一組極具沖擊力的數(shù)據(jù)，讓聽(tīng)眾看到生活方式不健康將會(huì)產(chǎn)生多么可怕的后果，這樣的震驚能夠使聽(tīng)眾快速調(diào)整狀態(tài)，投入到聽(tīng)演講中去。③引起聽(tīng)眾的好奇心。演講者可以在開(kāi)篇指出一種特別的現(xiàn)象，聽(tīng)眾出于好奇就會(huì)認(rèn)真聽(tīng)演講，想知道演講者如何分析或解釋。④向觀眾提問(wèn)。演講者可以在開(kāi)篇提出一個(gè)問(wèn)題，這樣可以引發(fā)聽(tīng)眾的思考，也會(huì)引導(dǎo)他們?nèi)ヂ?tīng)演講者如何解答問(wèn)題。此外，也可以在開(kāi)篇引用一段名言，或是講述一個(gè)故事等，這些基本的開(kāi)篇方式被無(wú)數(shù)的演講證明是實(shí)用而且有效的。 觀點(diǎn)明確，支撐有效 毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，在演講稿中，主體段的信息量最大，寫(xiě)作量也最大。如何清晰地闡釋演講者的觀點(diǎn)或演講要點(diǎn)，如何用相關(guān)事實(shí)有效地支撐演講者的各個(gè)論點(diǎn)或要點(diǎn)，是演講稿主體段寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)該把握的關(guān)鍵。喬布斯在斯坦福大學(xué)的畢業(yè)演講中明確給出了三個(gè)要點(diǎn)：① the first story is about connecting the dots. ② my second story is about love and loss. ③ my third story is about death.為了清晰、有效地闡述自己想要表達(dá)的這三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，他運(yùn)用了以下三種手段：首先是舉例子。喬布斯在演講中用了大量的事例來(lái)說(shuō)明他怎么對(duì)待學(xué)習(xí)、工作和死亡。比如他說(shuō)自己讀書(shū)時(shí)旁聽(tīng)有意思的書(shū)法課程，這些課在當(dāng)時(shí)對(duì)他沒(méi)什么實(shí)質(zhì)幫助，但是十年后在當(dāng)他設(shè)計(jì)第一款macintosh電腦的時(shí)候，這些東西全派上了用場(chǎng)，這個(gè)例子充分說(shuō)明了他演講的第一個(gè)要點(diǎn)——串起生命中的點(diǎn)滴。另一個(gè)手段是引用。喬布斯在演講中引用了一些名言警句來(lái)闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。比如在講到死亡時(shí)，他引用了一句格言：“if you live each day as if it was your last, someday you’ll most certainly be right.”這句話表明了他對(duì)于生命和死亡的看法，使聽(tīng)眾印象深刻。第三個(gè)手段是數(shù)據(jù)支持。在講第二個(gè)故事——關(guān)于愛(ài)和失去時(shí)，喬布斯用了一系列數(shù)據(jù)來(lái)支撐自己的觀點(diǎn)。他說(shuō)自己是幸運(yùn)的，因?yàn)?ldquo;woz and i started apple in my parents’ garage when i was 20. we worked hard, and in 10 years apple had grown from just the two of us in a garage into a $2 billion company with over 4000 employees. we’d just released our finest creation—the macintosh—a year earlier, and
由于公共演講的聽(tīng)眾一般有數(shù)十人甚至數(shù)百、數(shù)千人，再加上演講環(huán)境的不確定性(比如觀眾的歡呼或者抱怨)，演講者最好在進(jìn)入主題之后馬上給出所講內(nèi)容的框架結(jié)構(gòu)，使聽(tīng)眾能跟隨演講者的思路，更好地預(yù)判整個(gè)演講內(nèi)容，以達(dá)到良好的演講效果。比如，喬布斯在2024年斯坦福大學(xué)畢業(yè)典禮上的演講中，開(kāi)篇稍微寒暄之后就進(jìn)入正題：“today i want to tell you three stories from my life. that’s it. no big deal. just three stories.”聽(tīng)眾馬上能對(duì)演講內(nèi)容做出預(yù)判——今天會(huì)聽(tīng)到喬布斯談三點(diǎn)，然后他們會(huì)關(guān)注具體是哪三點(diǎn)。這種演講就具備了“以觀眾為中心”的特質(zhì)。喬布斯在隨后的演講中分別提到，“the first story is about connecting the dots.”“my second story is about love and loss.”“my third story is about death.”由于演講思路非常明晰，聽(tīng)眾在聽(tīng)完之后也會(huì)記憶猶新。
i’d just turned 30.”數(shù)據(jù)很直觀，能讓聽(tīng)眾更直接地認(rèn)識(shí)和理解演講內(nèi)容。 結(jié)尾有“道”，畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛 演講的結(jié)尾往往需要起到“畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛”的作用，要盡量做到意味深長(zhǎng)、啟發(fā)思考。開(kāi)篇和正文再好，如果結(jié)尾過(guò)于平淡，整個(gè)演講的精彩程度也會(huì)大打折扣。那么如何做到結(jié)尾有“道”呢?首先我們來(lái)看看喬布斯的這篇演講稿，他的結(jié)尾比開(kāi)篇更加出彩，采用的是“引文結(jié)尾”的方式，達(dá)到了引人深思的效果。他在結(jié)尾說(shuō)道：“stewart and his team put out several issues of the whole earth catalog, and then when it had run its course, they put out a final issue. it was the mid-1970s, and i was your age. on the back cover of their final issue was a photograph of an early morning country road, the kind you might find yourself hitchhiking on if you were so adventurous. beneath it were the words ‘stay hungry. stay foolish.’ it was their farewell message as they signed off. stay hungry. stay foolish. and i have always wished that for myself. and now, as you graduate to begin anew, i wish that for you. stay hungry. stay foolish.”喬布斯不僅在演講結(jié)尾引用了這句“stay hungry. stay foolish”(求知若渴，虛懷若谷)，而且重復(fù)三遍，強(qiáng)化了聽(tīng)眾的印象。這句話后來(lái)也被廣泛傳播，被譽(yù)為該篇演講的精髓。 除了喬布斯這種“引文結(jié)尾”的方式，常見(jiàn)的演講結(jié)尾方式還有如下幾種：①總結(jié)演講。對(duì)演講中的各個(gè)論點(diǎn)或要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單總結(jié)和梳理，加深聽(tīng)眾的印象。②強(qiáng)有力的陳述。這種方式不同于引用他人之言，往往是演講者自己的總結(jié)和心聲。一個(gè)非常經(jīng)典的例子是patrick henry的演講“liberty or death”。他在結(jié)尾時(shí)說(shuō)道：“is life so dear, or peace so sweet, as to be purchased at the price of chains and slavery? forbid it, almighty god! i know not what course others may take; but as for me, give me liberty, or give me death!”③首尾呼應(yīng)。在演講結(jié)尾對(duì)開(kāi)篇提到的主題和重點(diǎn)進(jìn)行重新闡述，這是體現(xiàn)
當(dāng)然，演講稿在結(jié)構(gòu)方面的邏輯順序有許多種，喬布斯的這篇演講是按照話題順序和時(shí)間順序來(lái)安排的。除此之外，還有空間順序，“提出問(wèn)題——分析問(wèn)題——解決問(wèn)題”的順序等。大家可以根據(jù)不同演講內(nèi)容的需要來(lái)安排自己演講稿的邏輯順序和整體結(jié)構(gòu)。
開(kāi)篇出彩，吸引聽(tīng)眾
演講稿的開(kāi)篇往往需要花費(fèi)大量的功夫去設(shè)計(jì)。在寫(xiě)作開(kāi)篇時(shí)，演講者需要結(jié)合聽(tīng)眾特點(diǎn)、演講場(chǎng)合和演講主題等因素，爭(zhēng)取在一開(kāi)始就緊緊抓住聽(tīng)眾的注意力和興趣。下面筆者就介紹一下基本的演講開(kāi)篇模式，供大家以后寫(xiě)作演講稿參考。
演講內(nèi)在統(tǒng)一性的經(jīng)典形式，值得借鑒。 為了更加有效地掌握文中講到的寫(xiě)作演講稿的要點(diǎn)，筆者建議大家做到以下三點(diǎn)：①多看。多看一些演講素材，比如名人演講、演講比賽優(yōu)秀選手的演講等，積累大量的一手素材;也有必要閱讀一些關(guān)于英語(yǔ)公共演講的書(shū)籍，筆者在此推薦stephen e. lucas的《演講的藝術(shù)》(the art of public speaking)一書(shū)。②多想。學(xué)會(huì)分析這些演講之所以精彩的原因，可以從筆者上面講的幾點(diǎn)入手分析。③多練。在有了一定的積累之后，要大量練習(xí)寫(xiě)作演講稿，話題可以從日常學(xué)習(xí)和工作中選取，這樣練習(xí)起來(lái)會(huì)更有興趣和成就感。 (本文選自《新東方英語(yǔ)》雜志2024年2月號(hào))
演講稿開(kāi)篇的目的是吸引聽(tīng)眾。喬布斯在他的演講稿開(kāi)篇使用的是“關(guān)聯(lián)話題與聽(tīng)眾”的方式。這是一種比較有效的方法，因?yàn)槿藗円话銓?duì)自己的事情都很關(guān)注，和自己相關(guān)的事情也會(huì)格外留意。喬布斯在演講開(kāi)篇說(shuō)道：“i am honored to be with you today for your commencement from one of the finest universities in the world. truth be told, i never graduated from college. and this is the closest i’ve ever gotten to a college graduation.”高度贊美斯坦福大學(xué)——這就是在與聽(tīng)眾發(fā)生關(guān)聯(lián)。喬布斯就是通過(guò)這種方式讓聽(tīng)眾一開(kāi)始就對(duì)自己產(chǎn)生好感或?qū)ψ约旱难葜v內(nèi)容產(chǎn)生興趣。當(dāng)然，喬布斯還用了適當(dāng)?shù)挠哪?，更好地融洽了與聽(tīng)眾的關(guān)系。
演講內(nèi)在統(tǒng)一性的經(jīng)典形式，值得借鑒。 為了更加有效地掌握文中講到的寫(xiě)作演講稿的要點(diǎn)，筆者建議大家做到以下三點(diǎn)：①多看。多看一些演講素材，比如名人演講、演講比賽優(yōu)秀選手的演講等，積累大量的一手素材;也有必要閱讀一些關(guān)于英語(yǔ)公共演講的書(shū)籍，筆者在此推薦stephen e. lucas的《演講的藝術(shù)》(the art of public speaking)一書(shū)。②多想。學(xué)會(huì)分析這些演講之所以精彩的原因，可以從筆者上面講的幾點(diǎn)入手分析。③多練。在有了一定的積累之后，要大量練習(xí)寫(xiě)作演講稿，話題可以從日常學(xué)習(xí)和工作中選取，這樣練習(xí)起來(lái)會(huì)更有興趣和成就感。 (本文選自《新東方英語(yǔ)》雜志2024年2月號(hào))
除了喬布斯的這種開(kāi)篇方式外，我們還需要了解和掌握其他一些開(kāi)篇方式：①指出演講話題的重要性。比如要做一場(chǎng)關(guān)于“英語(yǔ)演講的藝術(shù)”的演講，演講者在一開(kāi)始就可以指出該演講對(duì)于聽(tīng)眾今后的學(xué)習(xí)、工作將會(huì)有很大幫助，甚至可以給出一些數(shù)據(jù)和實(shí)例，讓聽(tīng)眾明白不聽(tīng)這個(gè)演講將會(huì)是一個(gè)損失，這樣聽(tīng)眾就會(huì)樂(lè)于認(rèn)真聽(tīng)演講了。②使聽(tīng)眾感到震驚。例如要做一場(chǎng)關(guān)于“生活方式與疾病”的演講，開(kāi)篇就可以給出一組極具沖擊力的數(shù)據(jù)，讓聽(tīng)眾看到生活方式不健康將會(huì)產(chǎn)生多么可怕的后果，這樣的震驚能夠使聽(tīng)眾快速調(diào)整狀態(tài)，投入到聽(tīng)演講中去。③引起聽(tīng)眾的好奇心。演講者可以在開(kāi)篇指出一種特別的現(xiàn)象，聽(tīng)眾出于好奇就會(huì)認(rèn)真聽(tīng)演講，想知道演講者如何分析或解釋。④向觀眾提問(wèn)。演講者可以在開(kāi)篇提出一個(gè)問(wèn)題，這樣可以引發(fā)聽(tīng)眾的思考，也會(huì)引導(dǎo)他們?nèi)ヂ?tīng)演講者如何解答問(wèn)題。此外，也可以在開(kāi)篇引用一段名言，或是講述一個(gè)故事等，這些基本的開(kāi)篇方式被無(wú)數(shù)的演講證明是實(shí)用而且有效的。
i’d just turned 30.”數(shù)據(jù)很直觀，能讓聽(tīng)眾更直接地認(rèn)識(shí)和理解演講內(nèi)容。 結(jié)尾有“道”，畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛 演講的結(jié)尾往往需要起到“畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛”的作用，要盡量做到意味深長(zhǎng)、啟發(fā)思考。開(kāi)篇和正文再好，如果結(jié)尾過(guò)于平淡，整個(gè)演講的精彩程度也會(huì)大打折扣。那么如何做到結(jié)尾有“道”呢?首先我們來(lái)看看喬布斯的這篇演講稿，他的結(jié)尾比開(kāi)篇更加出彩，采用的是“引文結(jié)尾”的方式，達(dá)到了引人深思的效果。他在結(jié)尾說(shuō)道：“stewart and his team put out several issues of the whole earth catalog, and then when it had run its course, they put out a final issue. it was the mid-1970s, and i was your age. on the back cover of their final issue was a photograph of an early morning country road, the kind you might find yourself hitchhiking on if you were so adventurous. beneath it were the words ‘stay hungry. stay foolish.’ it was their farewell message as they signed off. stay hungry. stay foolish. and i have always wished that for myself. and now, as you graduate to begin anew, i wish that for you. stay hungry. stay foolish.”喬布斯不僅在演講結(jié)尾引用了這句“stay hungry. stay foolish”(求知若渴，虛懷若谷)，而且重復(fù)三遍，強(qiáng)化了聽(tīng)眾的印象。這句話后來(lái)也被廣泛傳播，被譽(yù)為該篇演講的精髓。 除了喬布斯這種“引文結(jié)尾”的方式，常見(jiàn)的演講結(jié)尾方式還有如下幾種：①總結(jié)演講。對(duì)演講中的各個(gè)論點(diǎn)或要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單總結(jié)和梳理，加深聽(tīng)眾的印象。②強(qiáng)有力的陳述。這種方式不同于引用他人之言，往往是演講者自己的總結(jié)和心聲。一個(gè)非常經(jīng)典的例子是patrick henry的演講“liberty or death”。他在結(jié)尾時(shí)說(shuō)道：“is life so dear, or peace so sweet, as to be purchased at the price of chains and slavery? forbid it, almighty god! i know not what course others may take; but as for me, give me liberty, or give me death!”③首尾呼應(yīng)。在演講結(jié)尾對(duì)開(kāi)篇提到的主題和重點(diǎn)進(jìn)行重新闡述，這是體現(xiàn) 觀點(diǎn)明確，支撐有效
毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，在演講稿中，主體段的信息量最大，寫(xiě)作量也最大。如何清晰地闡釋演講者的觀點(diǎn)或演講要點(diǎn)，如何用相關(guān)事實(shí)有效地支撐演講者的各個(gè)論點(diǎn)或要點(diǎn)，是演講稿主體段寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)該把握的關(guān)鍵。喬布斯在斯坦福大學(xué)的畢業(yè)演講中明確給出了三個(gè)要點(diǎn)：① the first story is about connecting the dots. ② my second story is about love and loss. ③ my third story is about death.為了清晰、有效地闡述自己想要表達(dá)的這三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，他運(yùn)用了以下三種手段：首先是舉例子。喬布斯在演講中用了大量的事例來(lái)說(shuō)明他怎么對(duì)待學(xué)習(xí)、工作和死亡。比如他說(shuō)自己讀書(shū)時(shí)旁聽(tīng)有意思的書(shū)法課程，這些課在當(dāng)時(shí)對(duì)他沒(méi)什么實(shí)質(zhì)幫助，但是十年后在當(dāng)他設(shè)計(jì)第一款macintosh電腦的時(shí)候，這些東西全派上了用場(chǎng)，這個(gè)例子充分說(shuō)明了他演講的第一個(gè)要點(diǎn)——串起生命中的點(diǎn)滴。另一個(gè)手段是引用。喬布斯在演講中引用了一些名言警句來(lái)闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。比如在講到死亡時(shí)，他引用了一句格言：“if you live each day as if it was your last, someday you’ll most certainly be right.”這句話表明了他對(duì)于生命和死亡的看法，使聽(tīng)眾印象深刻。第三個(gè)手段是數(shù)據(jù)支持。在講第二個(gè)故事——關(guān)于愛(ài)和失去時(shí)，喬布斯用了一系列數(shù)據(jù)來(lái)支撐自己的觀點(diǎn)。他說(shuō)自己是幸運(yùn)的，因?yàn)?ldquo;woz and i started apple in my parents’ garage when i was 20. we worked hard, and in 10 years apple had grown from just the two of us in a garage into a $2 billion company with over 4000 employees. we’d just released our finest creation—the macintosh—a year earlier, and i’d just turned 30.”數(shù)據(jù)很直觀，能讓聽(tīng)眾更直接地認(rèn)識(shí)和理解演講內(nèi)容。
i’d just turned 30.”數(shù)據(jù)很直觀，能讓聽(tīng)眾更直接地認(rèn)識(shí)和理解演講內(nèi)容。 結(jié)尾有“道”，畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛 演講的結(jié)尾往往需要起到“畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛”的作用，要盡量做到意味深長(zhǎng)、啟發(fā)思考。開(kāi)篇和正文再好，如果結(jié)尾過(guò)于平淡，整個(gè)演講的精彩程度也會(huì)大打折扣。那么如何做到結(jié)尾有“道”呢?首先我們來(lái)看看喬布斯的這篇演講稿，他的結(jié)尾比開(kāi)篇更加出彩，采用的是“引文結(jié)尾”的方式，達(dá)到了引人深思的效果。他在結(jié)尾說(shuō)道：“stewart and his team put out several issues of the whole earth catalog, and then when it had run its course, they put out a final issue. it was the mid-1970s, and i was your age. on the back cover of their final issue was a photograph of an early morning country road, the kind you might find yourself hitchhiking on if you were so adventurous. beneath it were the words ‘stay hungry. stay foolish.’ it was their farewell message as they signed off. stay hungry. stay foolish. and i have always wished that for myself. and now, as you graduate to begin anew, i wish that for you. stay hungry. stay foolish.”喬布斯不僅在演講結(jié)尾引用了這句“stay hungry. stay foolish”(求知若渴，虛懷若谷)，而且重復(fù)三遍，強(qiáng)化了聽(tīng)眾的印象。這句話后來(lái)也被廣泛傳播，被譽(yù)為該篇演講的精髓。 除了喬布斯這種“引文結(jié)尾”的方式，常見(jiàn)的演講結(jié)尾方式還有如下幾種：①總結(jié)演講。對(duì)演講中的各個(gè)論點(diǎn)或要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單總結(jié)和梳理，加深聽(tīng)眾的印象。②強(qiáng)有力的陳述。這種方式不同于引用他人之言，往往是演講者自己的總結(jié)和心聲。一個(gè)非常經(jīng)典的例子是patrick henry的演講“liberty or death”。他在結(jié)尾時(shí)說(shuō)道：“is life so dear, or peace so sweet, as to be purchased at the price of chains and slavery? forbid it, almighty god! i know not what course others may take; but as for me, give me liberty, or give me death!”③首尾呼應(yīng)。在演講結(jié)尾對(duì)開(kāi)篇提到的主題和重點(diǎn)進(jìn)行重新闡述，這是體現(xiàn)
結(jié)尾有“道”，畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛[來(lái)源：新東方 作者：錢(qián)希] 無(wú)論在學(xué)習(xí)還是工作中，我們都會(huì)接觸或用到各類英語(yǔ)演講，小到課堂作業(yè)和工作匯報(bào)，大到會(huì)議發(fā)言和職位競(jìng)選。那么如何才能打造精彩的英語(yǔ)演講稿呢?下面筆者就以喬布斯2024年斯坦福大學(xué)畢業(yè)演講稿為范本來(lái)具體剖析一下英語(yǔ)演講稿的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，幫助大家了解其基本寫(xiě)作要領(lǐng)。 結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，邏輯清晰 由于公共演講的聽(tīng)眾一般有數(shù)十人甚至數(shù)百、數(shù)千人，再加上演講環(huán)境的不確定性(比如觀眾的歡呼或者抱怨)，演講者最好在進(jìn)入主題之后馬上給出所講內(nèi)容的框架結(jié)構(gòu)，使聽(tīng)眾能跟隨演講者的思路，更好地預(yù)判整個(gè)演講內(nèi)容，以達(dá)到良好的演講效果。比如，喬布斯在2024年斯坦福大學(xué)畢業(yè)典禮上的演講中，開(kāi)篇稍微寒暄之后就進(jìn)入正題：“today i want to tell you three stories from my life. that’s it. no big deal. just three stories.”聽(tīng)眾馬上能對(duì)演講內(nèi)容做出預(yù)判——今天會(huì)聽(tīng)到喬布斯談三點(diǎn)，然后他們會(huì)關(guān)注具體是哪三點(diǎn)。這種演講就具備了“以觀眾為中心”的特質(zhì)。喬布斯在隨后的演講中分別提到，“the first story is about connecting the dots.”“my second story is about love and loss.”“my third story is about death.”由于演講思路非常明晰，聽(tīng)眾在聽(tīng)完之后也會(huì)記憶猶新。 當(dāng)然，演講稿在結(jié)構(gòu)方面的邏輯順序有許多種，喬布斯的這篇演講是按照話題順序和時(shí)間順序來(lái)安排的。除此之外，還有空間順序，“提出問(wèn)題——分析問(wèn)題——解決問(wèn)題”的順序等。大家可以根據(jù)不同演講內(nèi)容的需要來(lái)安排自己演講稿的邏輯順序和整體結(jié)構(gòu)。 開(kāi)篇出彩，吸引聽(tīng)眾 演講稿的開(kāi)篇往往需要花費(fèi)大量的功夫去設(shè)計(jì)。在寫(xiě)作開(kāi)篇時(shí)，演講者需要結(jié)合聽(tīng)眾特點(diǎn)、演講場(chǎng)合和演講主題等因素，爭(zhēng)取在一開(kāi)始就緊緊抓住聽(tīng)眾的注意力和興趣。下面筆者就介紹一下基本的演講開(kāi)篇模式，供大家以后寫(xiě)作演講稿參考。 演講稿開(kāi)篇的目的是吸引聽(tīng)眾。喬布斯在他的演講稿開(kāi)篇使用的是“關(guān)聯(lián)話題與聽(tīng)眾”的方式。這是一種比較有效的方法，因?yàn)槿藗円话銓?duì)自己的事情都很關(guān)注，和自己相關(guān)的事情也會(huì)格外留意。喬布斯在演講開(kāi)篇說(shuō)道：“i am honored to be with you today for your commencement from one of the finest universities in the world. truth be told, i never graduated from college. and this is the closest i’ve ever gotten to a college graduation.”高度贊美斯坦福大學(xué)——這就是在與聽(tīng)眾發(fā)生關(guān)聯(lián)。喬布斯就是通過(guò)這種方式讓聽(tīng)眾一開(kāi)始就對(duì)自己產(chǎn)生好感或?qū)ψ约旱难葜v內(nèi)容產(chǎn)生興趣。當(dāng)然，喬布斯還用了適當(dāng)?shù)挠哪?，更好地融洽了與聽(tīng)眾的關(guān)系。 除了喬布斯的這種開(kāi)篇方式外，我們還需要了解和掌握其他一些開(kāi)篇方式：①
演講的結(jié)尾往往需要起到“畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛”的作用，要盡量做到意味深長(zhǎng)、啟發(fā)思考。開(kāi)篇和正文再好，如果結(jié)尾過(guò)于平淡，整個(gè)演講的精彩程度也會(huì)大打折扣。那么如何做到結(jié)尾有“道”呢?首先我們來(lái)看看喬布斯的這篇演講稿，他的結(jié)尾比開(kāi)篇更加出彩，采用的是“引文結(jié)尾”的方式，達(dá)到了引人深思的效果。他在結(jié)尾說(shuō)道：“stewart and his team put out several issues of the whole earth catalog, and then when it had run its course, they put out a final issue. it was the mid-1970s, and i was your age. on the back cover of their final issue was a photograph of an early morning country road, the kind you might find yourself hitchhiking on if you were so adventurous. beneath it were the words ‘stay hungry. stay foolish.’ it was their farewell message as they signed off. stay hungry. stay foolish. and i have always wished that for myself. and now, as you graduate to begin anew, i wish that for you. stay hungry. stay foolish.”喬布斯不僅在演講結(jié)尾引用了這句“stay hungry. stay foolish”(求知若渴，虛懷若谷)，而且重復(fù)三遍，強(qiáng)化了聽(tīng)眾的印象。這句話后來(lái)也被廣泛傳播，被譽(yù)為該篇演講的精髓。
i’d just turned 30.”數(shù)據(jù)很直觀，能讓聽(tīng)眾更直接地認(rèn)識(shí)和理解演講內(nèi)容。 結(jié)尾有“道”，畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛 演講的結(jié)尾往往需要起到“畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛”的作用，要盡量做到意味深長(zhǎng)、啟發(fā)思考。開(kāi)篇和正文再好，如果結(jié)尾過(guò)于平淡，整個(gè)演講的精彩程度也會(huì)大打折扣。那么如何做到結(jié)尾有“道”呢?首先我們來(lái)看看喬布斯的這篇演講稿，他的結(jié)尾比開(kāi)篇更加出彩，采用的是“引文結(jié)尾”的方式，達(dá)到了引人深思的效果。他在結(jié)尾說(shuō)道：“stewart and his team put out several issues of the whole earth catalog, and then when it had run its course, they put out a final issue. it was the mid-1970s, and i was your age. on the back cover of their final issue was a photograph of an early morning country road, the kind you might find yourself hitchhiking on if you were so adventurous. beneath it were the words ‘stay hungry. stay foolish.’ it was their farewell message as they signed off. stay hungry. stay foolish. and i have always wished that for myself. and now, as you graduate to begin anew, i wish that for you. stay hungry. stay foolish.”喬布斯不僅在演講結(jié)尾引用了這句“stay hungry. stay foolish”(求知若渴，虛懷若谷)，而且重復(fù)三遍，強(qiáng)化了聽(tīng)眾的印象。這句話后來(lái)也被廣泛傳播，被譽(yù)為該篇演講的精髓。 除了喬布斯這種“引文結(jié)尾”的方式，常見(jiàn)的演講結(jié)尾方式還有如下幾種：①總結(jié)演講。對(duì)演講中的各個(gè)論點(diǎn)或要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單總結(jié)和梳理，加深聽(tīng)眾的印象。②強(qiáng)有力的陳述。這種方式不同于引用他人之言，往往是演講者自己的總結(jié)和心聲。一個(gè)非常經(jīng)典的例子是patrick henry的演講“liberty or death”。他在結(jié)尾時(shí)說(shuō)道：“is life so dear, or peace so sweet, as to be purchased at the price of chains and slavery? forbid it, almighty god! i know not what course others may take; but as for me, give me liberty, or give me death!”③首尾呼應(yīng)。在演講結(jié)尾對(duì)開(kāi)篇提到的主題和重點(diǎn)進(jìn)行重新闡述，這是體現(xiàn)
除了喬布斯這種“引文結(jié)尾”的方式，常見(jiàn)的演講結(jié)尾方式還有如下幾種：①總結(jié)演講。對(duì)演講中的各個(gè)論點(diǎn)或要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單總結(jié)和梳理，加深聽(tīng)眾的印象。②強(qiáng)有力的陳述。這種方式不同于引用他人之言，往往是演講者自己的總結(jié)和心聲。一個(gè)非常經(jīng)典的例子是patrick henry的演講“liberty or death”。他在結(jié)尾時(shí)說(shuō)道：“is life so dear, or peace so sweet, as to be purchased at the price of chains and slavery? forbid it, almighty god! i know not what course others may take; but as for me, give me liberty, or give me death!”③首尾呼應(yīng)。在演講結(jié)尾對(duì)開(kāi)篇提到的主題和重點(diǎn)進(jìn)行重新闡述，這是體現(xiàn)演講內(nèi)在統(tǒng)一性的經(jīng)典形式，值得借鑒。
為了更加有效地掌握文中講到的寫(xiě)作演講稿的要點(diǎn)，筆者建議大家做到以下三點(diǎn)：①多看。多看一些演講素材，比如名人演講、演講比賽優(yōu)秀選手的演講等，積累大量的一手素材;也有必要閱讀一些關(guān)于英語(yǔ)公共演講的書(shū)籍，筆者在此推薦stephen e. lucas的《演講的藝術(shù)》(the art of public speaking)一書(shū)。②多想。學(xué)會(huì)分析這些演講之所以精彩的原因，可以從筆者上面講的幾點(diǎn)入手分析。③多練。在有了一定的積累之后，要大量練習(xí)寫(xiě)作演講稿，話題可以從日常學(xué)習(xí)和工作中選取，這樣練習(xí)起來(lái)會(huì)更有興趣和成就感。
i’d just turned 30.”數(shù)據(jù)很直觀，能讓聽(tīng)眾更直接地認(rèn)識(shí)和理解演講內(nèi)容。 結(jié)尾有“道”，畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛 演講的結(jié)尾往往需要起到“畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛”的作用，要盡量做到意味深長(zhǎng)、啟發(fā)思考。開(kāi)篇和正文再好，如果結(jié)尾過(guò)于平淡，整個(gè)演講的精彩程度也會(huì)大打折扣。那么如何做到結(jié)尾有“道”呢?首先我們來(lái)看看喬布斯的這篇演講稿，他的結(jié)尾比開(kāi)篇更加出彩，采用的是“引文結(jié)尾”的方式，達(dá)到了引人深思的效果。他在結(jié)尾說(shuō)道：“stewart and his team put out several issues of the whole earth catalog, and then when it had run its course, they put out a final issue. it was the mid-1970s, and i was your age. on the back cover of their final issue was a photograph of an early morning country road, the kind you might find yourself hitchhiking on if you were so adventurous. beneath it were the words ‘stay hungry. stay foolish.’ it was their farewell message as they signed off. stay hungry. stay foolish. and i have always wished that for myself. and now, as you graduate to begin anew, i wish that for you. stay hungry. stay foolish.”喬布斯不僅在演講結(jié)尾引用了這句“stay hungry. stay foolish”(求知若渴，虛懷若谷)，而且重復(fù)三遍，強(qiáng)化了聽(tīng)眾的印象。這句話后來(lái)也被廣泛傳播，被譽(yù)為該篇演講的精髓。 除了喬布斯這種“引文結(jié)尾”的方式，常見(jiàn)的演講結(jié)尾方式還有如下幾種：①總結(jié)演講。對(duì)演講中的各個(gè)論點(diǎn)或要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單總結(jié)和梳理，加深聽(tīng)眾的印象。②強(qiáng)有力的陳述。這種方式不同于引用他人之言，往往是演講者自己的總結(jié)和心聲。一個(gè)非常經(jīng)典的例子是patrick henry的演講“liberty or death”。他在結(jié)尾時(shí)說(shuō)道：“is life so dear, or peace so sweet, as to be purchased at the price of chains and slavery? forbid it, almighty god! i know not what course others may take; but as for me, give me liberty, or give me death!”③首尾呼應(yīng)。在演講結(jié)尾對(duì)開(kāi)篇提到的主題和重點(diǎn)進(jìn)行重新闡述，這是體現(xiàn)
